You Poem by Kimberley Marie

You

Rating: 4.5


You do it to yourself,
You do!
You love what you can't have!
You make YOU look bad!
You are nothing.
You pretend to be strong;
You are weak.
You never think.
You don't even know yourself!
You can change.
You can be something!
You can love what you want!
You can have anything!
You know YOU;
You are me!
You CAN be strong!
You can be YOU!

Thursday, November 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem when I was in my 20's. I was very depressed and it started off dark. As I was writing, I changed my tone into something more positive.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 06 December 2014

Very nice poem. Uplifting thoughts indeed.

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