Musfiq us shaleheen

Bronze Star - 2,020 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Yesterday And Today - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

Yesterday I was sick and
Moon was far from my window
I called you that it was full of dark
Miss you very-

You told me that you were busy
Drink is over, hanged out today
You called me today, said you are free
I told you, I am sound and moon shimmers at my window

- Shaleheen,11th November,2013


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Yesterday And Today- The Busy Love

Comments about Yesterday And Today by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Rookie James Safi (11/20/2013 1:44:00 PM)

    very nice poem. simple but awesome. i liked the way you represent your views.
    keep writing.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (11/14/2013 1:35:00 PM)

    i love it the juggling of words yet they are so well pinned..brilliant (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/13/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    the poem have picturesque value/ I told you, I am sound and moon shimmers at my window// lovely thank you (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,220 Points Sallam Yassin (11/12/2013 12:18:00 PM)

    Yes everyday is a new day
    with new stand and new stanza/ bright (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 13, 2014


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