Work In Progress Poem by Joseph James Breunig 3rd

Work In Progress

Rating: 2.8


This body is imperfect and flawed,
originating from earthly dust;
it houses a spirit searching to find
the one, true God in which to trust.

To see myself as Yahweh does,
requires mustard seed of Faith’s leap
and to take tangible action
since people know that “talk is cheap”.

Separated unto holiness
to accomplish His Purpose and Plan
while sharing the Salvation Message
is the whole duty of man.

Expanding my personal growth
by a divine, refining process,
inspires a desire for betterment
and to expedite this “Work in Progress”.

Sunday, April 30, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: religious
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shalia Robinson 15 February 2007

WOW! ! I really enjoyed reading your poem it was similar to mines. This was nicely written and I enjoyed reading it. Work in progress that is what we are in. We have a duty down here and we have to work in progress. Look forward to reading more.

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Brian Dorn 07 June 2006

Joseph, nothing 'cheap' about this... a great ending to a fantastic poem! Brian (a work in progress)

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Goldy Locks 30 April 2006

interesting piece. insightful and empowering, yet humbling at the same time. a bit cliche with 'since people know that talk is cheap, ' i'd stear clear of lines like those. best care, susanj

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Joseph James Breunig 3rd

Joseph James Breunig 3rd

Bangor, Maine (USA)
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