On God's Mountain Poem by Joseph James Breunig 3rd

On God's Mountain

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To be on your mountain top
with an elevated view,
could my chances increase
for getting a glimpse of you?

Standing barefoot in your presence
before a burning bush consumed,
would your glory envelop me
as a spiritual womb?

Moses saw your backside,
but show me instead your face and eyes.
Having direct interaction with you
should cause my faith to be revised.

Conquering obstacles of Life
via a mountainous climb,
while developing a personal relationship
help makes the upward trek sublime.

Saturday, February 25, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: mountain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 30 October 2019

Well articulated and nicely penned with spiritual insight. A fine and lofty verse.

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Ernestine Northover 06 September 2006

May your wish come true. Lovely poem of a longing to see our Lord. Nicely written. love Ernestine XXX

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Christian Eliab Ratnam 21 July 2006

WOW! ! ! This poem simply blew me away. It's awesome the way combine personal feeling with so wonderful truth. I loved this one! ! ! Beautiful, just beautiful.

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Joe...A fine piece of verse, relating to Faith and the human element of ocassional Doubt...Fact is, I suppose, we'd all like a glimpse at HIS eyes, and smile of reassurance...But then thats what Faith is all about, as so I was taught back at Holy Family Grammar....Great piece...Job well done, Joe'''''''''''''''''''FJR

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