Work Against Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Work Against

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Work against
But break not spirit
Conspire with
But never fail to greet

These are civil norms
One must be well informed
Humanity demands
Lovely and beautiful trend

No one minds sugar coated pill
But certainly keeps in mind ill will
That goes till he dies
One should never use it or try

Love wins race
Hate looses it on face
Poor suffers in circle
But invites less trouble

What one has to loose?
If he correctly chooses
The words cost nothing
But rich yield is positive thing

No one attacks
Unless poked with stick
Even snakes do not bite
If tail is not hit

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

Work against But break not spirit

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

Like 8 hours ago by Freedom Writer to Work against

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

welcoem rohini daud a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

Maricela Ramírez and Anii Hassan like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

great work jo malLess than a minute ago Awesome Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

confused by the general theme V.M. Marcoccia2 minutes ago For me it seems like the poem has no general theme, somewhat confusing me as the reader. I did enjoy the first stanza, but the poem could use some work Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago enjoy dear it has reverse swing

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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