Woman On The Road To Lhasa Poem by Deepa Agarwal

Woman On The Road To Lhasa

Rating: 4.8


Beneath the mask
my face melts
like a jaggery cake in the sun
Mercifully,
I can see
even
as I preserve the pink of my skin.

But what’s the use?
my sisters remain strangers
behind yak skin cheeks
that cannot exchange smiles
to lighten
the tyranny
of the road to Lhasa. All
blinding earth and searing sky
bleached bone and rubble
hung over a chafing saddle
feeding fleas.

Only
when night’s black tent
enfolds the enemy, sun,
can I breathe. Let
chilly air soothe broiling skin
let laughter flow free…
as I shed the mask.

Hard it is for a woman
far from home. And
endless the road to Lhasa
beneath a mask.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 10 February 2016

The ordeals of high altitude faced while travelling on road to Lhasa in the Himalayas have been amazingly narrated by the poetess in this wonderfully penned poem along with the respite the night provides to them at places of camping.Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 10 February 2016

I have read a fantastic poem - a rarity these days. Kudos!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 11 February 2016

Very well written.Enjoyed reading it.

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Radhakrishnan Mundayur 02 March 2016

Taking the road to Lhasa is i feel a metaphor only - the poet beautifully describes how life is tough for a woman, she has to mask herself and get through the day's challenges & yet she goes to be with laughter perhaps strengthening herself to go through the next days challenges

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Rajesh Thankappan 27 February 2016

Taking the road to Lhasa is no joke and this you have beautifully depicted in this poem though the eyes of a woman who shares her laughter after a day's hard work.10/10

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Soumita Sarkar 23 February 2016

This poem contradicts and celebrates women empowerment.....she is travelling alone yet the unfriendly landscape is burden turning everything into a mask.....Thanks.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 19 February 2016

Very nice poem, especially the last few lines, Hard it is for a woman, far from home. And endless the road to Lhasa beneath a mask. Thanks for sharing.

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L Rao 15 February 2016

Hi its nice....pls feel free to read my poems. Regards laxman rao

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Deepa Agarwal

Deepa Agarwal

Almora, Uttarakhand, India
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