With Smiling Face Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Smiling Face

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“My angelic star I have no words for thee”
Her words were making me totally free
I was floating on imagery love ship
Happy Tears were rushing out to weep

“But that I am happy you chose me”
These words took me under tree
I looked at ripe fruits that were just above
Her words were adding happiness to prove

She was only one and bright moon
I was waiting for her in blazing sun
For so many nights, she had kept me alone
The priceless moment had still not gone

I was unaware of her reaction
Even though she had skillfully hidden
She might have tried to reach me in open
I had such feeling to emerge all of sudden

It is all different today
She is holding hand in gentle way
I find her softness with touch
She is no less than fairy as such

Her eyes are gorgeous and royal
I wish to remain with her as loyal
No more going away till she leaves me behind
I know for sure that she is mild and kind

I find it as totally sacred
She has successfully led
Taken me by surprise to say “yes”
I will have to now cheer up with smiling face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

“My angelic star I have no words for thee” Her words were making me totally free

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Gajanan Mishra 18 December 2013

cheer up with smiling face, good write, sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

Ritu Bhargava1 hour ago very well written..simple words and nice rhyming..captures your feelings well

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

A Tiwari nice poem welcome

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Ma life Wowww.....really wonderful poem Sir, tks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

great Jay Thompson60 minutes ago She must be very special Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

Honey Ezeofor1 hour ago A well written. Comment +1 Nice

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