With Presence Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
With Presence
Your presence proved alight of glimmer
Soon I became swimmer
Found great and vast ocean
The happiness on face was never seen this before
It has brought tremendous joy
I have whole world to enjoy now
With you by the side
What else I shall decide?
The desert has witnessed boom
The roses have emerged with blossom
I have no words to express
You can see it yourself and trace
I hadn’t believed in divinity so far
It was heard and felt with normal continuity
I was floating with ignorance
There is complete change now with your presence
Yes it something more to reveal
Make you energetic and force you to feel
It can strengthen one belief that it has lot more to do
Take you out of darkness and pass the light through
Wow man, this is awesome. I can definitely tell you know what you're doing with nearly 10,000 poems. It really shows. I might add a comma after the word Yes, but that's just me and i think you have a really impeccable piece here. That's the only thing that really stuck out as a possible fix, but it's not really needed if you like the exact juxtaposition of the stanzas and the poem itself. 8 hours ago by Peter Hamilton | Reply
Very true. Presence of some one special can usher in sea change.
This is a wonderful poem.Your presence makes all the deference 2 hours ago by venkata lakshmi narasimharao to With presence in life
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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your words made me smile. This was so lovely thank you for sharing. 8 hours ago by laura duran | Reply