With Positive Start Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Positive Start

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I look back and think seriously
There is nothing new to offer continuously
Where from we bring new topics?
Human mind does not suffer from such magic

Readers develop affiliation
They find some sort of excitation
Each topic must offer some angle
With delicate touch of love triangle

Human life is full of misery
With only option to remember almighty
Human mind reads it as temporary phase
Force him to double efforts and earnestly chase

The struggle for whole life brings new dimension
He has enough of time to go in for new session
Slight success makes him to long for more results
In such way new foundation is laid and structure is built

There ends one quest and begins with new
There is no restriction to think and review
The path is wide open to walk smoothly
The foot steps can be seen readily

Such is story for human success
With no thorough fare or access
It is dedication and hard work
That makes good beginning with positive start

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

excellent. Wcmcheshi Sakata5 minutes ago The poet has a good command of words, and controls the emotions of the reader. Comment 0 From start to end

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Britt Cocola5 minutes ago This poem had my mind racing from start to finish. Great introspection.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

like it gregory ramos7 minutes ago a very good read Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Muhammad Khalid Khan9 minutes ago With positive start

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

I look back and think seriously There is nothing new to offer continuously

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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