Why I Need To Cry And Have God In The Sky Poem by Abdallah Gamal

Why I Need To Cry And Have God In The Sky

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Once I was sitting under the tree.The sun sit in a muddy spring.
The flowers were crying beside me. And a bird wounded his wing.
I raised my sight, awh what I see... A storm and great thundering.
I worried, what will happen to me. I was lost in a mysterious ring.

All my grief got into my mind. I felt the importance of life.
And I felt that I became blind.I've cut pain through a knife.
I thought to walk against the wind, and put an end for that strife.
I remembered God, and guess what I found, I've found my life.

I said why am I sad? Why I care about that grief, while others are happy.
all what I need is belief, that there is God in the sky who makes them happy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdallah Gamal 17 July 2011

Of course I thanking Him everyday no every time no every moment for his many blessings on me :)

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I like it. positive poetry! great write!

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Ace Of Black Hearts 17 July 2011

When you are at the end of you're wits. When you think it'll never get any better just look up. Another Great Poem.

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Santosh Sharma 18 July 2011

One who has faith in God, needs not to worry.

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Constance K Yost 18 July 2011

Your faith and your poems are beautiful. Keep writing every day as time permits. Good work! Constance Yost

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Deodatus Agricola 29 November 2012

wow! this is so great buddy! ! i like your rhyming especially the three breaking in the last stanza, congrats and keep it up dear poet! !

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Jessie Hopkins 16 November 2011

This poem can help so many remember God is always there for them. And for that, humanity can never thank you enough. :)

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Debra Martin 16 August 2011

I totally agree I too have God so there's no need to cry for long He has away of wiping the tears from are eyes.Thank you Father God! ! ! Thank you for reminding us all that there is a God who cares....

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Chaths Odion 28 July 2011

like the title! ! nice work!

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Esther Ayala 26 July 2011

hey, thanks so much for inviting me to read your poems. Great Poem, Ditto to everybody's comment. I really liked the line 'I remember God, And guess what I found, I've found my life.' Simply put, A solution to all problems, and yet so hard for many to figure it out.

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