Voice Of Freedom,25 January Revolution Poem by Abdallah Gamal
Voice Of Freedom,25 January Revolution
It was a dark night, full of fights, as if the sun will never rise
The bullets were passing beside me, but I couldn't realize
All the people were afraid, , I was trying to resist anywise
The voice of freedom rose high in the souls of the arise
The life of the oppressors, was walking anticlockwise
The voice of injustice blinked away, like its form analyse
The devil thought and thought, 'How could I make a plan,
to stop that voice, to regain everything without complain'
The birds began to sing, voice of freedom returned again
to prevail the happiness again, , to resist suffering pain.
The sun which we thought that it will never rise again.
it rose to remove steps of a man made it without vain.
The sun will keep rising and rising every day, , to bloom the flowers,
to remember us, how is that light, was thanks to God and martyrs.
very subterranean level of thoughts you conveyed through this poem. really nice. the second stanza was great! ! this is really inspirational, and inspirational poetry is one of the best genre there is. keep it up!
I am speechless for words, that is how good your poem was.10+++
You are 16 but write about more than yourself. That is a great thing about you and your poetry as most of the youths today are caught up in themselves, but you are not and that is great. keep writing good sir!
Hello brothers and sesters I have some thing important to say for everyone who reads Abdallah Gamal's poemsrhytoric is present, heartfelt are present, rhymes are present between the ribs of his special poem, inspiration is the experience and his brain and the magic come vie his pen. Moreover I can smell the glory, the honesty, the freedom and the pride. That's all what I have, good luck brother. Another aspect I have to say good bye for everyone who reads and write day and night to feed the brain with knowledge and light.
nice angle of vision towards this one! ! war and hope with survival...great work!
It is a beautiful poem, you express everything perfectly! ! Finally the voice of Freedom is rising up and nobody can shut it down, not any longer. The poem is a Masterpiece!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I can't say much except that it was a thought provoking poem. But at the same time I would suggest you take care of your diction. I also wrote a poem on the same topic, entitled 'Bravo Egypt! ' on page 1. You can read and rate it if you wish. Take care Akmal