Wherever I Am Poem by sagar patil.

Wherever I Am

Rating: 5.0


wherever i am
no matter where i am
your memories are always with me
should i tell someone
or not
whats in my heart,
thought it may seem that
the whole world is with me,
but still hidden from everybody
loneliness lives in my heart
i have only your
memories with me.

some people place a stake
of memories in their heart
while other cant recount
their memories perfectly,
some people remain happy
living in present.
while other night get everything
but in their heart they still say;

some people have the roots of
the past in their hearts
while for other relationships
break with sepration
some people keep space for
new experience in their heart
while other keep the lamp
of memories on their eyelashes

whats in my heart,
thought it may seem that
the whole world is with me,
but still hidden from everybody
loneliness lives in my heart
i have only your
memories with me...

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 19 October 2012

His melancholy and sadness need to be overcome! Beautiful friend Poet!

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Vipins Puthooran 19 October 2012

the whole world is with me, but still hidden from everybody loneliness lives in my heart/////// Beautiful line! ! ! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 20 October 2012

Sorrow is so profound can't be dug, only can be felt alone and alone. Thanks for sharing your grief in form of poem.

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Jaya Mishra 05 November 2012

Heart touching..... So honestly writen.... Keep going poet....

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Jiya 123 29 October 2012

the last stanza of the poem is really nice and well framed... Bon Efforts...Keep writing... :)

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Faith Franklin 22 October 2012

loved it from beginning to end.

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Unwritten Soul 21 October 2012

One of your nice poem, it mixed with two poles of emotions and feelings. keep it up your words, poet! _Soul

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Romeo Della Valle 21 October 2012

Like I said before, I have been there many times and I survived! Very touching and deep! Honest feelings nicely flowing in this well penned write! Check some of my recent posted poems and for sure you will clearly see that I gone through this situation and I know that it hurts! You young and strong and you too, will survive and one morning you will look at the mirror and laugh and guess what? The mirror will laugh along with you! You will find happiness again! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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