When You Wake Up Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

When You Wake Up

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The sweet wind beats against my door
Reminding me that it's your time to
Wake up and open the windows
To inhale the scent of opening buds to
Tread upon dew soaked grasses and
Stand amidst emerging shadows

Soft ray creeps stealthily into my room
Reminding me that it's your time to
Wear colored flowers in your hair
To be with early birds picking seeds in
The barn and to run behind calves as
Your face shines in the sun's glare

Lilting tune of the running brook afar
Reminds me sound of your laugh as
You walk down to the riverside
Looking at clusters of wandering clouds
My heart jumps with a hope to meet
You and my joy I just can't hide

Sunday, August 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 08 August 2017

A very lovely morning with sweet wind beating against the door, sun rays creeping stealthily into the room and running brook singing tunes, reminding you of your love- - A beautiful piece, thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 August 2017

My regards. I am glad you liked the poem. Thanks for taking time to read and comment.

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Susan Lacovara 07 August 2017

You bring about a beautiful dawnong, in appreciation of the promise of a new day. I am glad to wake up to this lovely poem. Have a most peace gilled and purposeful day! Glad you shared!

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 August 2017

Your comment is an absolute beauty. Thanks a ton for reading and comment. Regards.

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Lamar Cole 06 August 2017

Very delightful poem about waking up. The imagery is wonderful.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 August 2017

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking time. Regards.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 August 2017

Soft rays creep and sweet mind beats with perception. Tune of light gives love and mind continuously sings. An interesting poem is very well penned.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 August 2017

Thank you very much Sir for reading and comment. Regards.

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