When You Ask Me What Is Happiness? Poem by JoJo Hsu

When You Ask Me What Is Happiness?

Rating: 4.8


When you ask me what is happiness?
I will answer you,
Happiness comes from your body
It goes beyond the body.
You looked at me puzzled, I said

Such as a gift hanging on a tree on Christmas Eve
You are told not to peek.
- grievances born from the heart,
Your hands keep moving
Then the happiness was gone.

Only when you understand the feelings of the body,
And you told yourself not peeking.
Happy hanging in the tree,
You can reach out.

Thursday, June 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: education,happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 08 July 2019

Only when you understand the feelings of the body, And you told yourself not peeking. Happy hanging in the tree, You can reach out. Again philosophic touches on life and love. tony

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Shimizu Mizuhala 07 August 2019

Thank you for understanding the essence of poetry.

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Rajnish Manga 13 March 2018

Attaining happiness nicely conceptualized in the poem. Thought provoking, too.

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Shimizu Mizuhala 16 March 2018

Happiness is so simple, thank you for your appreciation!

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 June 2017

A modern style of writing. Thanks

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Shimizu Mizuhala 30 June 2017

Yes, I want to write it in a modern way.Thanks.

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