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When I Posted my First Lines...

When I posted my first lines
Very unripe, just a few words,
Gleanings of thoughts some fresh
Some buried in yellowing pages
My fingers lingered, delayed
‘Who would read my words? ’
‘Oh, they aren't worth anyone’s attention’
But I kept on…inscribing, penning, posting
And asudden a note appeared, a footnote
That inspirited me, lit a candle in my seclusion
Kind words falling like gold dust, my pen
Was animated, thrilled
Those words still blink in my mind,
Resonating lilting sounds,
Kindle my thoughts and keep me going on
Now a cataract of favour, of comforting words
Falls in my space on PH and I bask in easement
That flows deep down into my soul

Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, June 19, 2013


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  • Wahab Abdul (7/27/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    woooooooooooo! this is yr wonderful poetry i did not notice earlier, i love it... great keep going...

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  • Heather Wilkins (7/17/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem Jasmeen. writing is a passion. we are born to write.

  • Soulful Heart (7/8/2013 2:30:00 AM)

    Put d experience so pleasantly..., . Cud feel as my own...nice

  • Jenie Franksay (6/25/2013 3:52:00 AM)

    i am feeling just as you depicted here in your poem.
    love this poem.
    thanks 4 sharing.

  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (6/23/2013 1:11:00 PM)

    It is lovely if someone can relate to our words, however I say we write because it is good to air our what is in our brain and I got to the point too, that I know only those people will read it, who has to learn something from these words. Remember like people attracts each other, to walk in life's road together and help each other.
    Your writing is just lovely, shows who you are, a very sensitive, lovely person.

  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (6/23/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    We all felt the same way, your heart talks here Jasmeen.
    Great poem.
    Siya_! !

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 9:47:00 AM)

    When first itself burst then what you got the lucid thought Allah ki marji hai

  • Valsa George (6/23/2013 1:32:00 AM)

    The first step into the unknown can be intimidating and it may falter too! But if we keep moving, we gradually gain confidence and the first shouts of 'hurrah' will help us gain momentum and under new inspiration, we won't even hesitate to take a headlong plunge! A great write Jasmeen.....which has come from the heart!

  • David Wood (6/22/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    Straight from the heart. Keep your poems flowing Jasmeen, they are lovely

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/21/2013 9:25:00 AM)

    Every line expresses a feeling of the heart. First line to the last line. Thank you.

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