What Follows Poem by Elbert Matt Loubser

What Follows

Rating: 4.7


We walked this day downtrodden
as asphalt and pitiless penny
what justice there is in violence,
I know not,
but know not to grudge
until my bones wither
the winds would sweep me
the earthquakes take me
me and my ashes
the grey, dull, insipid, injustice
Oh take me now or let me be
or let me know
what time sits in wait for me
my path it hates me
wynds and debates me
the bushes and shrubs they hold me
to silence and to hush me

Please

just judge me
set my place in eternity...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malini Kadir 07 January 2009

beautiful poetry! congratulations! you have written so well deserves more than 10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 December 2008

A beautiful poem.....Highly meaningful and creative, more than your age Elbert. last lines dampened my heart......10/10.

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Fiona Davidson 17 December 2008

Such a beautiful heartfelt poem....well written...thank you

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Luzaan De Bruyn 16 December 2008

A DEEP POEM AND AGAIN I SHED JUST A TEAR: -) ! ! ! ! YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER, JUST BECAME ONE OF YOUR BIGGEST FANS

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Js Black 15 December 2008

Definitely something we all feel from time to time...well said and best wishes...Jeff.

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