One Last Second Poem by Elbert Matt Loubser

One Last Second

Rating: 4.9


One last second is all that I ask
Albeit the years have passed like the
swarms and flocks and schools and tribes
in numbers as great as the pain I have.

I perceived you true. How could such a smile,
with warmth and care challenging the flaming
sun, felt it to me like summer in wintery times,
not be the break of dawn in my darkest mile?

I held you once and would not let go,
not the safer waters, the fountains thereof
not the feelings, the hope, the love
not the care your eyes did show.

I stared for hours into your heart
and for the life of me could not tear my gaze,
I saw beauty were you saw null, this valley called You
had never shown me that we would part?

What hides your being, the truths of your love;
unmovable mountains of the pain of the past,
they cast shadows where light is long over-due
these ragged razor peaks of icy winds above.

I care not if there is fire, nor death, nor needles, nor snow
If I can't move these mountains, I'll climb forever.
My limbs might rot, my bones lay the land white,
my heart shall stay true, to you it'll go.

For now I hide it all, my heart it wears a mask.
I know a day would come one day
when every second I would not have to say
that one last second is all that I ask.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
nomad omnia 06 April 2009

Amazing. It resonates! In my favourites, for sure. N

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 December 2008

Even the mountains would cry for your love cry.Great piece Elbert.keep it up! ! !

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Luzaan De Bruyn 16 December 2008

YOU REALLY GOT ME INTO TEARS! ! ! GOSH I WOULD KILL FOR A GUY LIKE YOU! ! WELL DONE! ! ! ! ! 10 OUT OF 10 FOR YOU

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 December 2008

Well Elbert you've called on the seasons and elements to declare your love, well done.. Welcome to poemhunter and thanks for the comment.. Andrew 10

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