Treasure Island

Soumita Sarkar Ray

(Kolkata)

What can I change in me?


What can I change in me?
Towards that perfect state
Human errors and it’s me
to begin the search for that gate

Thoughts lead to exemplary actions
Potent actions such can lay route
to the peak scores of satisfaction
never erase the veins of your root

Attainment of a spot fixed target
And then embracing all happiness
Will make you ultimately forget
that desires spread wings limitless

Smaller goals demand smaller report
Let confidence have shadows of mountain
Sleeping esteem yours shall get support
to become a flourishing big fountain.

Submitted: Saturday, September 14, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013

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  • Elena Sandu (9/17/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    desires spread wings limitless of a great truth to me your poem spoke, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rohit Sapra (9/15/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    A nice poem although I would like to say that humans can never be perfect. As humans we can only try to be our best. (Report) Reply

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