Soumita Sarkar Ray

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What Can I Change In Me? - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

What can I change in me?
Towards that perfect state
That fate of absolute goodness
Is difficult and can never be
Human errors and it’s you and me
Why begin the search for that gate?

But...
Thoughts lead to exemplary actions
Potent actions such can lay route
to the peak scores of satisfaction
never erase the veins of your root


Yes...
Attainment of a cherished target
And then embracing all happiness
Will make you ultimately forget
that desires spread wings limitless

However...
Smaller goals demand smaller report
Let confidence have shadows of mountain
Sleeping esteem yours shall get support
to become a flourishing big fountain

So...
With content at heart
Lets make a new start
All that happens is fair
Without banishing efforts
Smile and begin to share


Comments about What Can I Change In Me? by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Veteran Poet - 1,937 Points Elena Sandu (9/17/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    desires spread wings limitless of a great truth to me your poem spoke, thank you! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,081 Points Rohit Sapra (9/15/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    A nice poem although I would like to say that humans can never be perfect. As humans we can only try to be our best. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 26, 2015


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