louis rams

Rookie - 619 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

Wedding Vows of a wife


i give you my heart as a token of my love
for JESUS filled it from above.

i searched my whole life through
for a man such as you.
i saw in you all that i desired
and you set my heart on fire.

i see that you are a caring and a non violent man
and praised me when i took a stand.
on all that i believe and feel to be true.
that's the reason i have fallen in love with you.

so on this beautiful day in my life
i consent to be your wife.

Submitted: Monday, June 22, 2009

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Comments about this poem (Wedding Vows of a wife by louis rams )

  • Rookie - 1 Points Kranthi Pothineni (6/23/2009 2:01:00 AM)

    See from other side is possible only for a heart full of love. Very good thought and write to ponder. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Christine Kerr (6/22/2009 11:05:00 PM)

    (And praise me when I took a stand.) This sentence tells so much, Respect, sharing, individualness, caring and consideration. I could never understand 'Two hearts become one.' but if it came from this perspective it all makes sense. Hats off to you Louis for seeing both sides 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (6/22/2009 8:53:00 PM)

    The bride displays a beautiful spirit. Very touching.
    10, of course.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (6/22/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    lovely write...actually we here in india have various vows which we don't understand...this seems from the heart (Report) Reply

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