Vision Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Vision

Rating: 5.0


Let him show you the path
The path towards the home
No need of math
No need of tome
Just imagine
Put the last brick
Then
See the success
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(2008/5/26)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 26 May 2008

A fine short poem. Imagination is of great power, that is true, and can lead us far.... as long as our feet are set on the floor......10

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~ Jon London ~ 26 May 2008

Remarkable power....You've set this one in concrete my friend. Fantastic piece '10' best wishes Jon

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 May 2008

a vision of wisdom! ! ! !

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Lynda Robson 27 May 2008

Very wise words Nightingale, I enjoyed reading your wisdom, thanks Lynda xx

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Thad Wilk 26 May 2008

He shows us all, the path to success to take, His path is best for our futures sake! Another great read Shiraz! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Rani Turton 26 May 2008

The symbolic paths in life are followed by some people who use reason and logic, others by their intuition or emotion...nicely phrased, Nightingale.

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Tsira Goge 26 May 2008

It is very melodious and beautifully made, Nightingale/ ...10... Tsira

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bjanka im 26 May 2008

...this is what we all know, ...inside... but sometimes the stream takes us away from the real path he s showing us, ...yet I m sure we ll all let him leed us the wright direction.......a dome real affection...

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