Venus Personified Poem by Alan Bruce Thompson

Venus Personified



She stood there pouting, adopting a film star pose,
As her curvaceous virile body, pushed shape into her clothes.

She perched on her stiletto heels, threw back her blond hair,
She stood high above the crowd, aristocratic, without care.

She rehearsed for hours to become Venus personified,
She got some men excited, the others she mortified.

She swayed along, her hips swinging, so vain.
And all of this performance to collect tickets on a train?

Thursday, November 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: train
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 20 November 2014

............her attitude comes alive in this write.....nice...

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Kim Barney 20 November 2014

Great poem. Based on a true experience?

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Alan Bruce Thompson

Alan Bruce Thompson

Newcastle upon Tyne, United Kingdom
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