Kelly Seale

Rookie (12-17-1958 / Norfolk, Va. USA)

'Venus And Mars' - Poem by Kelly Seale

This title, I saved months ago… feeling all creative and sharp as a whip,
But now… I just stare at the title, and can’t come up with even a quip.
I suppose that, based upon the books written by a well know author named Ruth?
No, that’s not it, Ok, I’ll be honest with you, Now I'm giong to tell you the truth.

The bottom line is this, and it's quite simple, Women and Men are different...
As if that’s new to your ears,
but women need certain things to be happy,
And Men, they just want the 3 B’s… Boobs, Butts, and Beers.
Women, they need to be taken seriously and know that they matter,
They need to be listened to, talked to and held-
Especially when there’s no expectations of sex
to be had...
And us men, we need to realize these things,
these differences…
Before we become Mr. Ex.
(That's sad.)

Women, they like to be treated like queens and princesses,
Because they are!
And give them our faithfulness and trust,
And us men, their Knights and their Kings,
We must learn to treat women as equals, Give them our hearts our souls, not just our lust- Or our bedroom play-things.

But don’t get me wrong now Girls,
I know you crave It as much as we…
If Not More!
So Men…Snap Out Of It!
And start acting like you have a clue…
Before you find that you’re out the door!

cKs.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A humorous attempt at trying to figure women out... tell me if I'm even close? Ha! ; -)

Comments about 'Venus And Mars' by Kelly Seale

  • Gold Star - 18,458 Points Ramesh Rai (6/30/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    a fine quest. i enjoyed your writr (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (6/27/2013 3:06:00 PM)

    a nice write on Venus and Mars. your seeking out the truth (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 26, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 27, 2013


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