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Hebert Logerie

(Haiti)

Women are The Best


Woman, Femme
Mujer, Mama
Soul, Ame
Fleur, Flora

Life is beautiful
With so many other wonderful
Languages

Throughout the ages
Women continue to be
The reasons why we are alive

I gave all women 5/5
For their external
And their internal
Beauty

They come under different name
At the end of the day, they are all the same
The Earth will always be round
No matter what, no matter what sound
They express under stress
They still clean our mess
Women are the best
Because they ace all of the tests.

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Submitted: Thursday, July 30, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, February 02, 2010

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  • Marama Kelly (9/22/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    Thank you for sharing your thoughts, view and concept with the rest of us.
    An interesting read indeed. Although it has a wonderful theme, it does tend to stutter instead of flow freely. I found the imagery that your words painted create a picture in abstract even though the words used describe passionately your views of the feminine persuasion. Overall it is a nice poem to read, although some wording and structure could improve it a bit more to give it flow and rhythmn. Thanks for inviting me to read and many blessings to you (Report) Reply

  • Pamela Jokerst (8/29/2009 7:19:00 PM)

    I enjoyed the message/concept of your poem that expresses the consistancy that is 'woman' no matter what culture. I like the inclusion of a woman's emotion side offering an inference that even in these emotional 'stress' moments or spin-outs, it's still part of her beauty or what makes her 'woman.' The lines that seemed out of place and threw me off a bit are the lines that discuss the earth: 'the earth will always be round, no matter what, no matter what sound.' I guess is that the speaker in a metaphorical way is comparing the earth to 'woman' as a means to enhance or continue to convey the constantness that is 'woman' and in that-there the beauty lies. Was that your intent or did I get it totally wrong? Over all I see the poem as a tribute to women...thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Harold K Schreiberg (8/23/2009 11:23:00 AM)

    Yes, Women are the best
    They make life beautiful
    They make life miserable
    Thru presence
    Thru absence
    Thank you, sir, for sharing your verses (Report) Reply

  • Aron Lelei (8/23/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    A woman of value, a woman by any name but it is true that women are the best. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam (8/23/2009 3:29:00 AM)

    Different type of poem. But understand your feelings.
    Well said. Great poem.
    Thanks for sharing with me (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (8/23/2009 12:58:00 AM)

    Yeah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1
    I know this feelingl.... they can cleanse our mess and make us feel so good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    very nicely said.....10..

    cheers
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Doha Ewiess (8/22/2009 4:15:00 AM)

    the first stanza is a nice combination between english and french languages :) ...and as usual...a very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rup Pokharel (8/19/2009 6:09:00 PM)

    Nice piece of art of yours i got to read.
    Thats why i always say and believe in'GOD CANNOT BE EVERYWHERE SO HE MADE MOTHERS'
    Worth reading poem..thank you for your pen and brain...
    Give us more to read...
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Jude Ogunade (8/18/2009 9:58:00 AM)

    I agree with you! Considering the fact that a woman was made from a man! In order word, if man must be complete, he needs a woman. Hmn! Then woman becomes the better because the inadequacy of man is made adequate in woman. Nice poem and thanks for corresponding with me. (Report) Reply

  • Kaykay Lolololololong (8/17/2009 5:29:00 PM)

    This poem is certainly different.
    I understand what you are saying..
    however women do get offended by the thought of us all being the same.
    But i do like how you write(:
    You should write more((: (Report) Reply

  • Jester's P (8/15/2009 10:28:00 PM)

    creative way of putting words into poetry- the imagery of mans desire...
    anyhow nice piece and it has a taste for 'mothers' or to 'woman' in general.
    beautiful to say that they are the best...maybe in one area of humanity...i can't say only and alone, remember man is also present in the creation story and will always be part of the whole journey towards the cosmic reality of unification between the he and she to form the one- mystery of existence. (Report) Reply

  • Ion Untaru (8/15/2009 1:44:00 PM)

    Life is impossible without women, without love. Love is the first law in universe! Best greetings. Sorry, you did not read/comment any of my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Passionate Flower (8/15/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    wow love the nice poem
    embrasing women and their roles in life
    and how they are important for men`s life
    thanx for the sharing
    best wishes
    regards (Report) Reply

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