Up And Down Poem by Neela Nath Das

Up And Down

Rating: 5.0


Up and down,
merry go round.
When you up,
can see the town.
The wind wraps up,
your face with hair,
you get scared,
when swings your chair.
You are in heaven,
near, near the sky.
The fake fear shouts,
let out other guys.
Merry-go-round when
comes down, down,
you do then see
some people around.
you fill with glee.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 11 March 2013

Referring to the Giant Wheel you say we go up and down allegorically reflecting the ups and downs of life, which is really beautiful!

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Vivek Tiwari 10 March 2013

Very nice details of swing. It's a great joy to be up and Down in the swing. And on the other hand it speaks of spirituality and cycling of life. Loved the thought development.

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