Unfound Narrator Poem by Lynette Dias Gouveia

Unfound Narrator

Rating: 5.0


I am the walking light
I am the vigilant night
I am the longing sight
I am the tentative plight

I am the strength in pain
I am the silent rain
I am the power insane
I am the anima in vain

I am the child in recklessness
I am the missing wilderness
I am the stars in endlessness
I am the living senselessness

I am the radiant fire
I am the violent desire
I am the truthful liar
I am the chosen messiah

I am the veiled rendition
I am the shrouded vision
I am the virtuous invasion
I am the intense deification

I am the extant misconception
I am the unused contraception
I am the bewildered interjection
I am the plunging perception

I am the scrupulous instructor
I am the emotional predator
I am the superior mediator
I am the unfound narrator

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetry Hound 12 April 2005

Lynette, you have talent but it isn't really displayed in this piece. Repeating the same beginning on each line is an over-used technique, probably the number one stylistic cliche. in poetry. Good thing I know you can do better. Regards.

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Ivy Christou 12 April 2005

This poem is fantastic. I like it very much.. well done! HBH

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 April 2005

Excellent Lynette. There is guts in this in case you didn't know. H

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Jean Le Goff 12 April 2005

You are not missing you are poet and good poet JFLG

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