(((Two Souls Uniting))) Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

(((Two Souls Uniting)))

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Two Souls Uniting
I can feel you all throughout me
so deep inside me
underneath, I can feel you move through me
I breathe you like I'm taking in my last breath
I feel like I'm fliped inside out,
you surround me

There's a voice that isn't mine; I listen
disconnecting from everything inside
Faitfully uniting as one without any self-control
Aching to embrace our love as one
You're everything I know

I have made choices that wasted many days
We have both waited for this
Blessing our love even stronger
even when we are apart

Imagine us making love
beneath the stars above
creating our own magical night
Our soulful glow being the only light
between us binding our souls as one
Saving ourselves from eternal hell
protecting eachother with our illusive shell

Knowing our testimonies are bound
to affect those around us
accepting all battles life throws our way
defeating many triumphant trials

Those who will remember,
will look upon us as archaic lovers
that will touch others hearts
and bless the finish from when
the powerful sensations start!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Clements 18 December 2006

I love this poem Kristin, it evokes a warm feeling of togetherness! Hope it's the case for you my sister XX loads of hugs Karen XX

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 December 2006

Archaic lovers...wish i had thought of that...Kris, no surprises here...When you pen...people read...i know, cuz im one of those people! Great Penning, young lady ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' FRANKSTER '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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