((((((~*~i Wana...~*~)))))) Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

((((((~*~i Wana...~*~))))))

Rating: 3.7


I wana gaze beyond the normal depths of your eyes,
To warp into a powerful trance; Mesmerize!

I wana be forever wrapped with your love
Perfectly fit, like a glove
Taking things slowly ~ eveloping as one
When afterwards, praising the One above!

I wana make our own paradise
I'll embrace you with my thighs
Making perfect melody while our hearts beat as one
From sundown til' sunrise!

I wana go on Harley rides
Feeling the heat of the pavement beneath us
The wind between us creating seductive tides
Knowing that'll happen one day is a definate plus!

I wana write our own harmonious song
You playin' the guitar, while I sing along
A reflection of our love for one another
Parents of two; You being a proud daddy as I a mother!

I wana always remember the feeling to wake up
Beside you with all that hair
To be bombarded while in bed by
Megan, Evan, Sarah and Sadie
O' can you imagine what a BLAST we'd all have there!

I wana show you in the end of every passing day
My love for you will stand true
Assurring one another we never have so blue!

I wana end this poem by saying
Whenever 'TOGETHER' is; is where
I wana call 'HOME! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 07 August 2006

This is the second time today I am left speechless Thankyou Tara for the other poem Love duncan X

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K, this rocks! - Happiness in the little things in life, acceptance, true love, encapsulated in a fine write. t x

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 09 August 2006

Hey Kristin, k that was a beautiful poem, Great work.

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***** ********* 09 August 2006

Good girl Kristin, this is just what you wanna do and you must keep saying and doing it. It is just what I wanna do too. Thanks for saying it for me. Smiling at you, tingling again, but with a tear and a cheer! ! ! You are really kicking that illness into touch in my opinion, Tai

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 August 2006

POETESS K., YOU SPUNKY TEMPTRESS OF LITERARY EXPELLINGS.YOU DO KNOW HOW TO WOOOO & WOW! YOU ALSO (IT APPEARS) HAVE THE FLAIR FOR SOME KICK-A** LYRICALS....GREAT PIECE MISS KRIS...YOU DO INDEED ROCK! '''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK(frankster)

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Ebone' Ingram 07 August 2006

It almost sounds like slam poetry (my favorite kind) . I think it's amazing. By the second or third stanza, I was totally caught up in it. Question: don't we ALL wanna...? Eni da Kid

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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