Two Men I Met Today Poem by salu salu

Two Men I Met Today

Rating: 5.0


Two men I met today
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He spent twenty minutes for me
Guiding me to the place where I wanna
a place very remote and i’m ignorant
He slit a paper and drew a graph
I didn’t understand yet but he never quit
making me familiar to all the curves,
hills and dales, signals and sites.
Still I lost all the ways, but
Finally, I am at destination.

And wanna back home
It’s a labyrinth you’ll lose
I was groping around……..
An old man came in help
Took much pressure to guide me
To right path, to my cosy little home.
I can’t forget his smiling face
With a waving hand in
Wiining me leading to the right path.
sparing his precious time for a stranger
How magnanimous the men around
Strengthen me the belief of humanity
There r people destined lead to success
There r tender hearts, with lovely spirits
I promise I must do something n return.
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salu

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Moore 15 November 2008

Goodness of the Heart, giving, a good feeling. Pass it around and it comes right back to you. Your Rewarded for thoughtfulness and kindness....10

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Reshma Ramesh 02 December 2008

strangers who are helpful are god in disguise...........nice write

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 December 2008

A noble thought in noble way by a noble soul is written.10 marks

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Raj Arumugam 08 January 2009

* a heart-warming and sincere poem, Salu Salu

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Yasser Koor 11 January 2009

tow words i have to say 'great poem' there is hope after all bad thing just we must have faith, ,

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Abdul Athani 28 September 2009

its a nice poem 10+++

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

How magnanimous the men around Strengthen me the belief of humanity Rachel Ann Butler

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Lee Crowell 30 April 2009

the originality here is refreshing, intelligent ideas mixed with simple symbolics

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Sandhya S N 12 March 2009

Dear, A small theme- well written. But could be more beautiful, if used less words some more apropriate. Try when U get time regards Sandhya

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Ershad Mazumder 27 January 2009

Good compose with an ordinary theme. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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