Love Poem by salu salu

Love

Rating: 5.0


Love is told manifold
and many are fooled.

(She) Stepped into the street and
dropped a star when blink
Followed a crowd squeaking
Pearls fallen in r smile
smashed hearts of love at carts
Smirked at the other side of lips
Sleeves up and laughs up her sleeves
Paced in a catwalk
Placed footprints in vivid
Enthused mob traced through the heels
So mass in procession treaded fast
Fasten belt and Spellbound
Waited long at doorstep.


Love in masquerade
Back at greenroom
Unfastens her mask
Laughs up her sleeves
Costumes peeled off
Paled profile reflected age
That laughed at her in ease
And she peeped at them in amuse.

-------salu----.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sivan P.G Menon 12 November 2008

Salu... well...penned.. the deception '....in cosmetic era... we all fall in love with..the 'masqueraded...images... true... and for this..reason..its an intrinsic...passion..un explainable... un quenched! ! ! regards...and keep going.. sivan menon

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 November 2008

finely expressed....captured a lot.....10+

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Seema Chowdhury 18 November 2008

lovely topic to write about. its a God given gift which we all feel from time to time and get trapped in this cobweb.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 01 December 2008

A vividly pictured poem. i applud you.

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Kesav Easwaran 03 December 2008

non-philosophical illusion...beautiful narration, Salu...well said...we all are fooled by well made ill conceived masks in life...10

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excellent poem..enjoyed your way of writing..

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Beauty Philosophy 28 September 2009

A wonderful and truthful poem...

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Pearls fallen in r smile smashed hearts of love at carts Rachel Ann Butler

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 23 April 2009

this is a work of art..truly wonderful

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Ratnakar Rout 11 April 2009

Hi! Salu, A good poem.I enjoyed reading.Thanks.

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