Twins At Birth Poem by louis rams

Twins At Birth

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we may be the same in face and needs
but! i am different in value and deeds.

while you love to flaunt your looks
i love to sit and read books.

you want to be the center of the crowd.
'i just look at you and frown'

you want to show people that.you are
the better of the twin
because you are happy and carefree.
but this is not what all people see.

there are times in life that
we are alike.
but! we are both seperate individuals
with different personalities.

i believe in the goodness in life
having children and a wife.

while you believe in the party rule.
in my eyes you are such a fool.

when it is time and the lord
calls our name.
will you still feel the same.

we are twins this i can see
but you are not the same as me.
so when you see that it's time for change
i will love you just the same.

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good write. choose virtue.

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Christine Kerr 25 April 2009

The idea has always fascinated me in the same and difference in twins, One always seem to be more aggressive then the other for sure. You might see another way of looking at them with my introvert and extrovert poem. Good write

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Heather S 03 April 2009

I have a twin brother named Darren and he is everything you explained in this poem.sadly he is the older one and he never lets me forget it.and yes linda when your born first Then your the older twin. I couldnt have written it better Love Heather Stephens

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I would hate to have a twin lol.. I wouldn't want to have the challenge this is such a cute poem.. I bet people with twins love it tho.. Great write Krista

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Linda Winchell 09 February 2009

Very well said about, 'Twins! ' Hey, were you born first? Then your the older one right? LOL Had to get that in! God Bless, Linda TEN!

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Sandra Fowler 09 February 2009

You have chosen to walk a very different way. But your twin is helpless against your prayers. Just keep on caring.10 for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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