Twinkling Evening-Morning Star. Poem by LaSoaphia QuXazs

Twinkling Evening-Morning Star.

Rating: 4.8


The best time to see the Evening star
Just before dark when I search the sky near and far.
All year the Star is passing high above my home,
Only in the middle of October I see it was always around my dome.

I sit in my chair; look into the darkening sky,
Following with my eyes as it's passing by.
The Evening star is the first one to shine above,
It takes long time until the rest follows that rare dove.

It is the first in the sky after the sun goes down
And the last to disappear when the morning sun takes away its crown.
Nobody is wasted, everything just comes and goes and immerse,
As everything and everyone is the child of the Universe.

As it was known in the past that the strong will survive,
Never give up, be strong, face life as it arrive.
Just have faith in goodness and loose the negative,
See the NOW as a privilege, open up to be progressive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 14 April 2017

We realize best time of calmness at Evening. At this time stars appear. We search them near and far. Sitting in chair we feel this night that gets light through stars. After sun goes down we see stars after and we feel this at first. We strengthen ourselves and with positive vibrations we keep faith on God. Very beautiful imagery is drawn in this poem. An outstanding poem is shared here....10

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Khairul Ahsan 11 January 2014

This is a soft, soothing poem that has inspired me to have a look at the sky and watch the celestial bodies from the dusk onward. 'I sit in my chair; look into the darkening sky, Following with my eyes as it's passing by. The Evening star is the first one to shine above, It takes long time until the rest follows that rare dove.' - I'll do that this evening, hopefully. 'Nobody is wasted, everything just comes and goes and immerse, As everything and everyone is the child of the Universe.' Very well said! Your last stanza is truly inspirational.

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LaSoaphia QuXazs

LaSoaphia QuXazs

Budapest, Hungary, living in the USA
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