Twin Triplets.No..Suspicion, Jealousy Poem by Valsa George

Twin Triplets.No..Suspicion, Jealousy

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SUSPICION

A centipede, surreptitiously crawling
With a hundred legs, listlessly crawling….crawling
Until from a covert hide out, it suddenly stings


JEALOUSY

If you rail relentless
Seeing others thrive prosperous
It is jealousy, doubtless!

Friday, August 9, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 August 2013

saying so much, Valsa, in so few words! comments by Thomas is surely an icing on the cake.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 09 August 2013

Frank opinion openly said in few words.

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Dinesan Madathil 09 August 2013

But we can`t often escape from these.... I have suspected people and things and have once or twice felt jealous of things silly indeed. Thank you Madam Valsa for sharing these triplets.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 August 2013

Beautiful Triplets. Everything a part of life. Loved reading the way it is presented.

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Danny Draper 10 August 2013

Terrific and especially the precise language and accuracy of the second verse, brilliant economical language.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2019

You have so nicely defined the meaning of suspcion and jealousy which are part of our life. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 May 2017

Suspicion and jealousy are also parts of our life. We are helpless.

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R.j. Wynn 13 August 2013

Very good ideas, interestingly similar.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 12 August 2013

Suspicion and Jealousy wonderfully explained crisply!

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Patricia Grantham 11 August 2013

Just like the centipede stings so does jealousy. They both have a lot in common with each other. A sting will soon disappear if it is not poisoned. Jealousy will hurt and can eventually cripple the person to whom it is directed toward if they allow it. Looks can be deceiving Madam Valsa. Love this one.

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