Twin Triplets.No.12. Wasted Efforts, Animation Poem by Valsa George

Twin Triplets.No.12. Wasted Efforts, Animation

Rating: 4.8


WASTED EFFORTS

A bridge across a dried up river
Beethovenian symphony in deaf ears
A volume of poems for prosaic minds

ANIMATION

Lone waters suddenly fructified with darting fishes
Dark night sky made aflame with twinkling stars
A barren heart fuelled with the elixir of love

Friday, May 31, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 31 May 2013

Beautiful lovely write Like the contrast between the stanzas. Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Kee Thampi 31 May 2013

watery lagoon with lovable fishes Lone waters suddenly fructified with darting fishes

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David Wood 01 June 2013

Beautifully written Valsa, what contrasts.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 03 June 2013

Valsa, nice comparison in wasted efforts- A dried up river doesn't need a bridge; No use of Beethovenian symphony to deaf ears; And to a prosaic mind no use of volumes of poems! What a wonderful imagination, Valsa! In animation too - Lone waters - with darting fishes; Dark night sky aflame with twinkling stars; and a barren heart fuelled with the elixir of love- all captivate the heart! Valsa, I seem to have rewritten the verses! Ha!

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Rajendran Muthiah 03 June 2013

The three lines in each triplet convey a similar idea. Excellent.

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Anjandev Roy 17 February 2020

An outstanding write......as usual. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 July 2018

Part - 2 - In first Triplet you have so impressively inscribed the wasted efforts through a bridge over the dried up river and symphony for person with deaf years. Both triplets are gorgeous and interesting.10 out of 10 for each triplets.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 July 2018

Part - 1 Lone waters suddenly fructified with darting fishes Dark night sky made aflame with twinkling stars A barren heart fuelled with the elixir of love.........so touching with nice imagery. When a barren heart is fueled with the elxir of love and and sky is filled with twinkling stars it gives immense pleasure though it brings contradiction.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 January 2018

Extremely well penned! WASTED EFFORTS and ANIMATION are equally equipped with lucidity of expression! I would quote two of my favorite lines from ANIMATION: Dark night sky made aflame with twinkling stars A barren heart fuelled with the elixir of love. Loved reading this insightful piece poetry!

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Akhtar Jawad 01 June 2017

Very few persons are interested in poetry still I don't think writing poems is a wasted effort.

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