Trust And Respect Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Trust And Respect



Lovely and beautiful woman
Can be looked upon as human
She can be guide and mentor in life
She can prove as good wife too

She has everything in form of natural gift
She is embodiment of strength with no shift
She is known for her kindness
Always keeps smile on face

Her life revolves around family
Fully conscious of duty assigned by an almighty
She sees everything In her mission
And performs till lat with compassion

She applies no mind
But remains always kind
Uses emotions of heart
Very real and as natural art

Trust and respect
As she holds all noble acts
As sister, wife and mother
She holds position better

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Lovely and beautiful woman Can be looked upon as human She can be guide and mentor in life She can prove as good wife too

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

A strong Lady and her life's work Daniel McDade2 minutes ago So very strong a picture of a true hearted mate and friend. Gives a nice description of a family woman

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

I like how the poem is about a woman, yet its not only about love **** Ryandal Gilmore5 minutes ago I like how the poem is about a woman, yet not about just love. It is also about how good that woman is at being a woman, a wife, a sister, a mother, etc... I rated four stars due to the fact that there are a few grammatical errors, and they can be corrected, but, all in all, this is a very, very good poem. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Rhyme sporadic and too abstract Samantha Meroney5 minutes ago I like the point/purpose of this poem, it's definitely a worthy and admirable one. The rhyming scheme as well as the profuse amount of abstraction however made it hard to really be struck by the poem in a meaningful way. Without the rhyme it would read like a mission statement and not necessarily poetry, in my opinion.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

A strong Lady and her life's work Daniel McDade2 minutes ago So very strong a picture of a true hearted mate and friend. Gives a nice description of a family woman. Comment +1 today

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Great Annika Kosek5 minutes ago Nice today

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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