! ! ! ! Treasure Hunt! ! ! Poem by Nikunj Sharma

! ! ! ! Treasure Hunt! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Seeds

of my

dreams

shine bright,

when sunshine

fills her

eyes.

Lazy

slow morning

reinforces

existence;

harbors

Hopes.

Pink sun

Rises, finds, shines

smiles on

A

treasure

trove

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 30 October 2009

This is very sweet and romantic, Nikunj. Relaxing and enjoyable. '10! ' my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Anjali Sinha 31 October 2009

pink sun a treasure trove a lovely treasure hunt nice, cool i liked it -10 anjali

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Indira Babbellapati 31 October 2009

a wonderful feeling to start a day with...

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Lady Grace 31 October 2009

the presentation is nice..allow me to use this as a power point presentation of my ''obra maestra'' dear....thanks a lot..naizz

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Deborah Cromer 08 November 2009

Beautiful! Simple and yet loaded with force. Very powerful in meaning and just the right usage of words to deliver a brilliant message of love. Life is for the living. No one alone can create, it takes two. Good work! Debbie

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Sonya Florentino 06 November 2009

such a bright inspiring poem.....love is truly a treasure to hold... lucky you!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 04 November 2009

a free verse. Nice one. It's good.

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Anju Addanki 02 November 2009

Wonderful piece a real lovely one

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This is a beautiful Waltz Wave Nikunj where your beloved is a treasure of sunshine. It is touching and romantic and a very special poem for you I can see. 10 love Karin

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