! ! ~~ Merry Xmas ~~! ! Poem by Nikunj Sharma

! ! ~~ Merry Xmas ~~! !

Rating: 3.8


The wind carries soft whispers
that winter has preserves for me.
The morning sun opens its eyes,
Rays struggle to see through the fog.

The snow continues to prepare
for the sledge, that shall prick
the heart to deliver the bounty
for the eyes that wait here.

Small eyes begin to shine again;
It's time to hold your dreams
and harbor hopes. The divine courier
is never too busy.

Before opening the wrap, I Shall
ask my questions, if I'm permitted
time. I've Heard the queue is
getting longer by the day.

A lighted tree echoes with smiles
as expectation takes birth. The mind
searches through the stacked
wants and desires.

A beam opens thought into points
where no sunlight reaches.
A thousand splendid suns illuminate
spirit's dark alleys.

14th December 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 24 December 2009

Message from Walterrean Sally: Your beautiful prose And lovely rhyme Cheer me at This special time. And I am wishing You the best For peace and love, And happiness. Merry Christmas! And Happy Holidays!

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Ency Bearis 24 December 2009

A splendid x-mas poem.....remarkable.........10

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An excellent poem....i loved it... Sir, ur style of writing is a cent percent poetic one...as the old poets use to write...like oscar wilde...P.B. Shelley etc. Their The real meanin of their poems can be understand by readin more than once... Same case with u... :)

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Nikunj Sharma 24 December 2009

Splendid expressive seasonal poem crafted with skill and delight.10 Best wishes from Orlando

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Fay Slimm 24 December 2009

'A thousasnd spendid sun' adorn your Xmas poem - - thank you Niks. and warmest of greetings from Fay.

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Marilyn Lott 11 March 2013

This is a beautiful and sensitive look into the heart of Christmas. Sweet and thoughtfully written. Warm Wishes,

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Lynda Robson 15 January 2010

Great imagery, a heart warming poem, hope you had a great Christmas, and it can be sled or sledge (same meaning) 10 Lynda xx

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Melanie Johnson 12 January 2010

What a beautiful poem Nik! ! I gave it a 10! You are extremely talented. =)

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Anjali Sinha 31 December 2009

A belated MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND FAMILY DEAR NIKSSSSSSS good write -10 anjali

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

this one is awesome!

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