Magnets Poem by Nikunj Sharma
Magnets
Wrapped carefully in words, feelings
travel across the miles. Edgy fingers;
wait to kiss the heart of keyboard,
mindful of space bar.
To know more about
each other, They live another day
full of smiles. Praying in their world;
playing the part assigned.
Heartbeats heard, stethoscope
not required, each beat expressive of
its intent. Far yet near
Faint yet clear.
Unseen forces; unknown faces,
Concerns for each other;
Silent reminders of existence
and belief at other end.
Undiscovered magnetism;
they defy the written
laws - likes repel, unlikes attract.
well said Nikunj! LOVE WAVES can invade the network and penatrate each Soul - each Mind. the sweet footsteps of Sincere words in the heart are the best proof of a Magnatic Poetic Love. Really you`re expressed well the SPIRITUAL LOVE/ 10 for your MAGNATIC LOVE
This is beautiful, and does explain alot of the inspiration found in poems...thank you :)
You must be proud to have had this in the Top 500 poems Nikunj. We all send out vibrations that are picked up by others and you have explained all this in an extremely creative way. Another top mark to add to your great score. 10 love Karin
Beautiful poem. Congratulations, dear poet. Today this poem is included in the Honoured list of Best Poems Of Member Poets at rank no.56. All the best, Dear Poet. Please continue to write and share on ph
simply love the nuanced ebb and flow, the subtle yet powerful linking 'far yet near, faint yet clear, ' such beautiful imagery and skillful mastery of poetry is truly rare and deeply inspiring!
And so it should be in the top 500. Totally amazing! What I would give to write like that. =) Great work!
Nice! ! ! Unseen forces; unknown faces, - (well described) Concerns for each other; Silent reminders of existence – (this is true) and belief at other end. Undiscovered magnetism; they defy the written – (it is where we all exist… in our own place…) laws - likes repel, unlikes attract.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Hi Nikunj - Magnetism is an amazing force and there are millions of electromagnets working all over the World to make high tech life a reality. The power of the NORTH & SOUTH poles to attract has a real counterpart in human magnetism. The beauty of Poemhunter is that through POETRY - which is a primitive universal force - people of different cultures - class - country and the religious and political divides can be attarcted to each other and interact through the common medium of poetry. People who would never meet in normal; circumstances and because of their 'ethnicity' might not even be allowed to meet! We 'Travel across miles' (V 1) we 'Know more about each other' (V 2) 'Heartbeats heard' Far & Fiant yet Near & Clear (V 3) . Magenetism is a Paradox so is Poemhunters! 'Unseen Forces' and 'Unknown Faces' 'Undiscovered Magnetism' - MAGIC! This poem so so describes my experience of POEMHUNTER that I love it (and wish I'd written it!) . Well done NIKUNJ I score it MAX. Yours in Poetry - JOHN.