Treading Water Poem by Sofia Kioroglou
Treading Water
I am walking ahead and ahead
and still in the same place.
I am treading water
walking through a morass.
I think I am making progress
but I am stuck when I keep walking.
Life is like that at times! With problems here and there. Nice work.
A highly expressive short poem............ WELL WRITTEN..... read my poem nd comment stay blessed
a poem of a felt situation that we have all been in at some point in our lives? ....well written
A nice and direct way to describe a state many, if not all, human beings find themselves in at some point in the course of their life. The poem certainly appears to the reader, in a quick and witty way. Nicely done.
This is a very frustrating state to find oneself in! An interesting philosophical quandry. I see the idea of progressing along a course that one knows has already completed, but unable to venture off in order to achieve progress. Thanks for sharing Sofia.
Thank you kindly for stopping by and reading! Your comment is greatly appreciated. Have a nice month ahead, Pamela! Be blessed!
Struggle is must to survive and progress, your poem deals with a dilemma we all see and encounter in life. A thought provoking poem, Indeed,10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is a classic display of wits. Good work
Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it. Have a nice weekend! Greetings from Greece!