Travel Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Travel

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I wished to travel with you my mom
Your question left me wondered
If we could make an entry to Disney Land together
Its so crowded and packed.
If we loose each other on our way
Though we were holding our hands tight and tied together to each other.

If we never meet each other after that entry
Though the journey to amusement park began together
Imagine the plight of one who is left behind all alone
Waiting for the other.

Today, you have to take me mom along with you on your path of travel.
If your hands are strong enough to pull me
If your hands have firm grip to hold me tightly
If you are confident you will never leave me behind on the way and go alone.
Like when I was small once!

I am ready to travel with you mom
As I am sure you wont leave me alone behind!
Is it possible?


©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note..... Just for fun I wrote...going on a giant wheel as I was just afraid to sit.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tadasha Tripathy 03 February 2014

While reading this poem I felt as if I am in my child hood.Really awesome with wonderful words.

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Rajesh Thankappan 30 January 2014

t is impossible that a mom will leave her child knowingly and intentionally. If at all a mother leaves her child's hand, it is just to encourage his growth so that he grows up into an all round individual.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 January 2014

We have been travelling with our moms since the time our life's real journey began.........Geetha............... nice reading

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 January 2014

I am ready to travel with you mom Nicely expressed to mom.

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