Sugar Lee you are the sun today,
Pervasive light and heat, and I
The valley floor, the birch pine slopes,
The snow-capped peaks, transparent sky
Through which you spread, and oh how
My toes are tingling miles away.
Then let us spread this picnic rug;
Come let's play mortals Sugar Lee.
Come stay a day, come lie an hour,
A lunar month, a solar year;
The world will organise itself the while
I whisper praises in your ear.
come, come and live together this whisper is crystal clear //// wow fantastic poem
Lovely poem, Luke! Congrats on being poet of the day! I loved these lines the most, The world will organise itself the while. Sometimes you just have to let go and flow along...
The world will organise itself the while I whisper praises in your ear.... A lovely love poem of the day. Congrats dear poet
PERVASIVE: 'Manifested throughout; pervading, permeating, penetrating or affecting everything.' I DON'T KNOW if my understanding is perfect, but I give 3 stars. bri ;)
A spurs of a moment, Inspirational poem of the poet, Great marvelous writing by the poet
I like the conversational tone, the awareness of nature as a backdrop 'transparent sky', and the praise which he gives her. Their time together makes clock time irrelevant, 'Come stay a day.../ A lunar month, a solar year; '. An excellent choice as poem of the day.
Come stay a day, come lie an hour, A lunar month, a solar year; The world will organise itself the while I whisper praises in your ear..... whispering praises in the ear.. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a wonderful write by Luke Davies....................