ramesh rai

Gold Star - 11,601 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Tranquility


Tranquility is the romance of nature
where seed fertile, sprouts
reproduce its genetic growth
to endless sequence

Submitted: Thursday, August 01, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 02, 2013

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  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/3/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    Serene souls find serenity in Nature. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (8/2/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    Lovely effort here. Sometimes I do just this: write one for the sake of prompting a restful spirit. One such of mine was – The Cat Stretches Out His Length –
    Adeline
    May I suggest: since 'fertile' is already active, it does not need an ‘s’. Also there is no e in sprouts. The poem itself is lovely and relaxing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,812 Points Patricia Grantham (8/2/2013 1:09:00 PM)

    Tranquility is a sense of well being and peace. Without this
    nature, humans, and animals would have a hard time
    existing on earth. Peace to you my brother. A nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 386 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (8/2/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    Great admiration of the Tranquil Nature! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,278 Points Tajudeen Shah (8/1/2013 2:06:00 PM)

    Dear blessed bard,
    your version of imaginations and passions on tranquility demands still worthy adoration. this verse leaves ample room for sensible interpretations and beautiful additions. Request you to edit it, after having blessed those lines with your views from a different wilderness of thoughts. God Bless. (see if you can bless me too with a review. i have just posted a few lines next to yours, please consider. rgds) tajudeen shah (Report) Reply

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