ramesh rai

Gold Star - 19,816 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Tranquility - Poem by ramesh rai

Tranquility is the romance of nature
where seed fertile, sprouts
reproduce its genetic growth
to endless sequence

Comments about Tranquility by ramesh rai

  • Veteran Poet - 1,022 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/3/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    Serene souls find serenity in Nature. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,389 Points Adeline Foster (8/2/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    Lovely effort here. Sometimes I do just this: write one for the sake of prompting a restful spirit. One such of mine was – The Cat Stretches Out His Length –
    May I suggest: since 'fertile' is already active, it does not need an ‘s’. Also there is no e in sprouts. The poem itself is lovely and relaxing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,762 Points Patricia Grantham (8/2/2013 1:09:00 PM)

    Tranquility is a sense of well being and peace. Without this
    nature, humans, and animals would have a hard time
    existing on earth. Peace to you my brother. A nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 972 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (8/2/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    Great admiration of the Tranquil Nature! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,394 Points Tajudeen Shah (8/1/2013 2:06:00 PM)

    Dear blessed bard,
    your version of imaginations and passions on tranquility demands still worthy adoration. this verse leaves ample room for sensible interpretations and beautiful additions. Request you to edit it, after having blessed those lines with your views from a different wilderness of thoughts. God Bless. (see if you can bless me too with a review. i have just posted a few lines next to yours, please consider. rgds) tajudeen shah (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 2, 2013

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