Toughest Job Poem by ramesh rai

Toughest Job

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Exploring the desert, valleys
high hills and mountains
with an expedition to cross
seas and oceans, pierced
all stars and planets
landed on the surface of sun
embrassed all good and evil
of the creation, I tormented
my divine soul to elude
from all sufferings of life

My endeavour could all be possible
except the ego of all creation
with which all are survived
dispensing them from supreme abode
and height of supreme consciousness
and letting to live under pride
of its own species; disallowing modesty
and sublimity for a perfect life.

I applied my several attempt
kept my mouth shut for all purpose
to bring modesty in my soul
but it stumbled somewhere on any reason
compelled me to lead the worldly life.

O' my Master of my all reasons
please get me to the supreme abode
where I am more and more humbled
with full modesty of supreme creation
my life be dedicated for supreme thought
and I bow my head before the supreme bliss.

Thursday, July 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 06 August 2014

The toughest job is to remain good in the face of all our natural instincts to wanrt more, to be more, leaving our souls in turmoil with our worldly ways! Beautiful, soul-searching write!

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Akhtar Jawad 30 July 2014

Speech is silver but silence is gold. A lovely prayer, a nice poem with a message and wish.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 July 2014

The last two lines provide the means for total submission. That is ultimate dedication. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 July 2014

Thoughtful and Meaningful poem. Especially the third stanza..I applied.... it's really the toughest job to shut the mouth from anything, rather I will tell in other words, to remain silent from everything. The more we talk, the more we get into worldly matters. Very true said. To lead a peaceful life, one has to keep away from worldly affairs. One is not affected by anything, which is really a toughest path for one to travel. But with meditation, thorough practice, let us hope one reach the Supreme abode...I think this is also a part of life to attain supreme bliss..I loved reading each lines.

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