Tracking A Vision Poem by Heather Burns

Tracking A Vision

Rating: 5.0


Your kisses
remain on my lips
my nostrils are
full of your
scent.

your face is ever
present
my eyes are full
of you
your touch lingers

a name written
on the pages of
my heart
forever endearing
tracking
a vision through
the ages of time.
never ending
my love.

Friday, July 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 July 2014

a vision through the ages of time. Eternal love beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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A very fine madrigal.I love it much.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 July 2014

a vision through the ages of time. An eternal feeling nicely delivered. Thank you.

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Salini Nair 20 July 2014

a feel of eternal love...............................

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Loaded with love and pregnant with passion. Well done my friend!

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2014

Lovely love poem filled with passion. Loved reading it. Thank you Heather for the lovely comment for my poems. Thanks a lot.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 July 2014

Such a sweet poem...Oh! I can relate to it...I know this kind of love! I will save it to my favorites.Thank you.

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