To My Son (Acrostic) Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

To My Son (Acrostic)

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May tomorrow makes you realize my boy
In this world your life is not a toy
Can you not listen to my lecturing
Hear me when I am talking
At this moment in time
Exert your effort to shine
Let your energy flow freely
At things worthwhile not deadly
Now is the time to understand
Go for good things at hand
Evil things never bring good
Living with it excites bad mood
Overcome all trials as you could.

My son I do care for you
And your mom too loves you
Reach out for your ambition
View life as innate inspiration
In the end you will succeed
Now act best and proceed.

Play your part as cool
In dealing with any fool
Zealous act is best
At time to pass a test
Receive all good advices
Real man can say no to vices
On his own stead without caprices.

Beware of evil company
Refute the tale of baloney
Attend to those with good characters
Treat them as your own brothers
Over the bad others.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Forrester 25 October 2013

Lovely poem Marvin, loving words from father to son.

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Hathy Tong 22 October 2013

Wonderful. That's really all I can say.

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Valerie Dohren 21 October 2013

Great advice from father to son. Well done.

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Dinesan Madathil 21 October 2013

A wonderful discourse upon what is ahead, what is that to be done and what not.. Apart from that, here is the warmth of a father`s true relation felt in kind and tone. A fine write Marvinji.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 October 2013

Let your energy flow freely At things worthwhile not deadly Great advice for all and particularly to the young. A good direction is of great value. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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