(to Be Named Later) Poem by n. j. saroff

(to Be Named Later)



The melancholy sound of gloom is a quiet haunting eating away at the back of my mind.
Its teeth are the voice commanding me to die.

I am just a passenger to the world's spinning
I sit,
I watch,
I have no control,

So I lie still in the grass as the rain falls against my bare skin,
Speaking in shades of blue,
Slurred words tumble out of the skies mouth
Saying nothing but drip drip drop

The night is wet and dreary when the scent of the storm, now gone, is all that is left
Does the lightning ever mourn the thunder when the sound comes from afar?

Thursday, April 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: blue,blues,melancholy,mental illness,rain,rain drops,sad,sky,storm
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
there was a thunderstorm and for the past few days I have had writers block so this happened thanks to the storm
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 21 April 2017

An outstanding poem. Thanks

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