To A Little Star Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

To A Little Star

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Backed up by a feeling;
Of emotions so intense
So subtle yet sparkling
With love and tenderness
For a baby small and charming
Like the spring in all its newness
Springing forth love in lushness
For the dearest, the softest bloom
Bringing joys and smiles on every face
Only yesterday I saw you crawling
Today you are walking
Falling and rising in between
And the world happy seeing
You growing up in God’s garden
Swaying erect and benign
A fountain carrying the lily truth
Pure, pristine holding my breath
The soul of many happy days
Dreamed in your countenance
Little star tucked, kissed and cuddled
Oh dear, where you are gone
Gone to a distant land
Heard- a belief be disproved
Not a kin of that kind
Nor made of flesh and blood
Yet a little flower
Wafting fragrance everywhere
Gladdening my heart
As if out of whole you are a part……

Wednesday, March 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 28 March 2014

A Heartfelt poem from your pen. I can see a cute little star rising in the sky...Loved reading it. Thank you Sir for many inspiring comments for many of my poems. In fact I am feeling too low to write any poem or even to write any comments for poems. Just a sort of blankness is ruling my mind. This phase will too pass away. Definitely I will come up with new poems as well as to write comments for poems. Thanks for the comments.

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Tanya Gupta 28 March 2014

lovely and heart touching poem!

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Tanmay Kumar Sankhua 27 March 2014

Very touching indeed, nicely composed..............

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Valsa George 27 March 2014

This little star many be now in the firmament among many a glittering star, looking and smiling at you or in the garden of God....! A sweet poem made emotive by tender love! Enjoyed! !

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