• Gold Star - 18,563 Points Lyn Paul (2/12/2015 7:54:00 AM)

    Have you ever written a book Deepak? Your words are so uplifting & soothing.
    I am always so glad I knocked on your page. Thank you

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  • Gold Star - 51,173 Points Akhtar Jawad (12/5/2014 8:47:00 PM)

    Deepak, the lamp, is truly a poet, spreading light of knowledge and fighting the darkness of ignorance. I love you and I love your poetry.

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (11/2/2014 4:38:00 AM)

    One of the talented and vibrant poet.
    It's an amazing gift you are blessed with
    to write poems on any topic
    especially related to nature and life.
    He also takes a lot of interest in reading others poems and well versed in writing comments.
    May you keep on contributing many more interesting poems the poetic world.
    Wish you all the best!
    God Bless you!

  • Gold Star - 4,870 Points Saheb Mohapatra (10/23/2014 8:06:00 AM)

    M.r Deepak kumar pattanayak is really an outstanding poet writing poems of all kinds.His works are immortal in the large world of POEMHUNTER.I myself is his disciple and I really wish he would give lots of incomparable gifts to the poetry world as he is continuously doing.

  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/7/2014 7:03:00 AM)

    nice poems. you are great in showing feels.that shows a good improvement. i invite you to read my poems at my poets page. that is a friendly invitation

  • Rookie - 204 Points Stan Petrovich (2/17/2014 9:39:00 AM)

    I heartily agree with Dinesh Nair. Some of Deepak's poems are simple illustrations of a way of life for anyone who wants to seek happiness can find it.

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (1/17/2014 10:14:00 PM)

    Mr DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK is perhaps new to the PH as could be guessed from the poems posted for the last few days. However, the quality of the submissions illustrates the talent of the poet who reaches out to variety themes for interpretation and elaboration. The splendour of his writes is obviously visible and there is an all pervasive charm throughout his poems written with specific care using the most apt diction and sticking to the amble use of poetic devices wherever possible.
    I wish Mr Deepak Kumar Pattanayak a very pleasant association with the PH and do hope in a short period of time he would prove to be a poet one whom the fellow members cannot afford to miss to read.


Birds(10 Short Poems)

Birds {10 short poems}

Oh, you little birds;
Happy to see you in your nest, so pretty,
so nice clinging to your mother’s breast

Wish my castle
Be like your nest where
God always rests

Wish to speak to you
In softest words, don’t shy away
As it pains me all the way

In a day, you will fly away
Sweet birds, up in the sky a happy fly
Not known to me your way

Only your songs
Treasured in my memory will
Chase you wherever you go and stay

Clear and blue is the sky
Grasses green and trees in leafage anew ...

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At First Sight

At first sight

Concealed it;
Within my heart,
Perchance love,
At first sight,
A new blend of wine,
Stranger to me,

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