Thoughts Of An Unknown Writter Poem by Ana Z. M.

Thoughts Of An Unknown Writter

Rating: 5.0


Im crying and tears are just coming out rolling down my cheeks...when i look myself at the mirror i see a great person who is capable of achieving anything.but guess what she is just playing strong but is looking for help i choak on my own problems knowing they wont never stop and leave.she lets all her sorrows and pain out crying is the only thing she can do and she thinks that she has found love-she relies completely on that perosn who she loves se tries to do things right hoping that that person loves her just the way she is and appreciate all of her but who can asure if she is being loved that way she deserves? Who trully knows?


** This are thoughts of one of my very best friends, she is an awesome person and writes so well. This piece is one of her deepest thoughts. I hope you all like it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i have been through this so many times.... its a great piece, tell her to keep writing for me :)

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rago rago 19 June 2009

a good thought of write...... polish it polish it..........

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makes one ponder....keep writing

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thoughts of one of my very best friends... one always finds reglection in mirror...very good thought and postive one but read mine'cry not' and my friend in mirror. u wil find an answer for ur friend. comment onit and let me know u got ananswer

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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

a good and impressive note omiting much meaningful questions..liked it very much..idea is rich, storical type... and intersting expressions..well done..10+++++++

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Michelle Crews 20 June 2009

WOW.....youre friend has expressed her/his feelings very well. It reminds me of *well* me....keep it up

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

yes, , , you friend has expressed her emotions well! ! ! send her my regards friend

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Eyan Desir 20 June 2009

Read over you repeated the word that, that, ok thank for your invite

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Jazz Annis 19 June 2009

that is soo nice of u too put her thoughts out there! it was really good!

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