***which To Follow? Poem by Ana Z. M.

***which To Follow?

Rating: 2.9


When love controls us
and rules us,
there's nothing we can't find imperfect in that person....

Somehow the others can,
they warn us, they try to protect us,
but we are so blinded for that feeling,
we believe they are wrong..

But when love takes over,
what can we do?
we just fight for that one person,
and nothing else matters...

love took me...
and now I have to fight for you..
fight with my family,
my beloved ones..

But what can I do...
follow orders for those who think I am who I am not,
that love me unconditionally but still don't know me at all...
Still I am doubting if they are wrong of they are right..

Or follow the other way,
where I have you,
the one who knows me from the tip of my toe,
to the tip of my longest hair..
the one who believes in who I am,
and shows me I can still smile whenever things are going wrong..

Who to follow?
The prejudice of my beloved ones,
or risking a whole family, a whole future,
but remaining with the one I love the most?

This questions I won't be able to answer them myself..
impatience and suffering all together with the joy of love
will guide me through the answer, which only time can tell...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 18 April 2010

When love strikes, just follow the dictate of your heart. A narrative romanticism poetry, full of emotions, a dilemma of young love. Nice and simple lines. How's you Ana?

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Noel Horlanda 18 April 2010

When love strikes, just follow the dictate of your heart. A narrative romanticism poetry full of emotions, a dilemma of a young love. Simple and nice. How's you Ana?

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