Just An Empty Soul Poem by Ana Z. M.

Just An Empty Soul

Rating: 3.7


Everything feels so dead,
my heart is just braking into pieces,
I'm living my days from day to night, night to day,
not feeling anything at all.

I am a hopeless soul,
I have no dreams,
I don't wish anything in life,
anything but your love.

We promised ourselves,
a love that was supposed to never end,
but distance grew on us,
now im just dying in my insides.

I got no more words,
I don't want anything at all,
I am empty, I am sad,
I am... just in love with you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Klaus 19 August 2018

These Words could be written about me. Just the way i feel or beter feel nothing except my love for her

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John Woodhouse 01 February 2009

Ana your poem is very beautiful, I love your use of language and your honesty. thanks jack

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Bonnie Collins 26 January 2009

This is very moving ana, and sometimes love can trully hurt more than any other pain known to mankind, however, one that is desitined to lead us to other paths and walks of life, which would make our life a better one... Very moving and your flow was trully good..... Bonnie

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Chey L 19 January 2009

Very good. I like it very much.

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John Smith 17 January 2009

You capture such realness, something I aspire towards.

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